Although there wasn't a solid flow to this piece, I loved the way you structured the poem. In some areas it seemed incomplete - but I think that's the beauty of it. It's almost like jagged ends to a roughly cut sheet of paper. One may have to read this piece more than once to comprehend it in several ways, though I liked that this doesn't possess much direction, yet establishes the definition of 'fear' in a unique manner. Well done :)

Wow dear,
this was so unique and full of feelings that wanted me to read and read....
you have achomplished to get attention of your readers by making them want to go with the poem, that is great success dear.

by the way, congrates on your publication.

Fear is something that all humans experience. It can be mind gripping and numbing to the soul. It can rob you from happiness that will be left unknow.

Destroing is mispelled hehe.. = destroying

Just to let you know sweetie....

--Sher

I really liked this, hun.
I thought because of the way it was set up I wouldn't.
I'm not big on the whole. . . nonstanza thing.
But, you did a great job with it.

Proves you shouldn't judge a book by it's cover. (:

5.5