by Crystal Gaze Sep 4, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Porcelain dreams. |
by Marc Ortiz
I really love your choice of words, the imagery in this poem is really good, well done. It was a long poem but It was a beautiful piece. |
by Tammie
Absolutely love this one. The flow was flawless and the vocab supurb. The details and descriptions created the clearest imagery as I read this piece. I could imagine every scene happening as you wrote, and I read it. |
This had some lovely imagery and vocab choice and seemed to flow so smoothly it was like watching it play out on the screen. |
Really good. the imagery was great. good work. |
A very exquisite piece of literature. A sad but great poem. i love the mataphors and how you flowed quite easily through the verses, 5/5 |