At first, the flow was doing well..
after awhile it kinda stopped.
In a way, it felt like you were pushing lines.
Other than that though,
the meaning behind this poem, is a wonderful one.
I've always tried to make a poem like this,
I just never could get out the right words.
Good work.

You never talk to me anymore.

fag.

I didnt delete any poems?

This is lovely, m'love.
Powerful words. xxx
5/5
-Heather