by silvershoes Sep 4, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
I wish, I wish I was the sun plunging beneath the weary day |
by Sunshine
Oh and lol i have the sime title ..just not same subject..don't think i stole it :P i never knew u had a poem with such a title REALLY |
by Sunshine
Jane I wish I was your best friend LOL.. |
It was a very beautiful poem, the descriptions and softness of your words were remarkable.Keep writing like that.. |
Very well penned peice of poetry. I loved the way it had repetition. The structure as well as the flow was excellent. Your choice of words was good. Great work, keep it up. |
by Bryan
This tis an EXCELLENT poem, loved it, the rhyme and flow twas perfect, tis a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming jane!! |