Really good, i liked it.

your servant:
atticus

This tis an EXCELLENT poem, loved it, the rhyme and flow twas perfect, tis a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming jane!!

Very well penned peice of poetry. I loved the way it had repetition. The structure as well as the flow was excellent. Your choice of words was good. Great work, keep it up.

Peace, Joe

It was a very beautiful poem, the descriptions and softness of your words were remarkable.Keep writing like that..
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Jane I wish I was your best friend LOL..

I so much enjoyed this one, was very emotional.. and very rich.
If i was to pick lines or words i would give u different conclusions..but I will be as general as I can.. Cause some lines showed how faithful u are..
some showed how caring!..how protective..
some showed the love u can give..others showed the loyalty in you!.
Some showed how true u are, and how much you would sacrifice..

The whole poem actually proved that who doesn't know you, truly DOESN't know you.

I love everything about this poem..everything..everything!

5/5

Oh and lol i have the sime title ..just not same subject..don't think i stole it :P i never knew u had a poem with such a title REALLY