Very unique poem I have come across. The shape is nice, I checked it. The wordings are beautiful. |
by Tricky Daze
Wow it's pretty amazing |
Concentrating your thoughts to a superior writing, keeps our reading go courage, its like a blooming blossom that continues the day go bright. You poems I read, your expressions I studied, your feelings I valued. All and all you deserve, its almost an excellent one I should say. ( 'I mean your writing'). Keep writing, bring more poems and keep me informed, to enable me to feel free to read your interesting poem lettering. Thanks for now, more thanks to follow.. bye! |
by Cyma Khan
Beautiful poem!!! |
by nikki
It took me a while to get the shape thingy but i got it, it is pretty cool. i wish i could do that with mine, it was a unique poem, very interesting, sweet and of course cute, another great poem from you, excellent job 5/5 |
Very emotional, with a lot of feeling in it. I like the form, it is very interesting. Whole piece sound so sincere which makes it truly beautiful and meaningful. The flow is great. |
by Unwitted
Very nice poem and the most unique poem I have ever read. |
by Cindy
Fsams |
by Angie
Very unique, the shape is an angel.... beautiful write.... |
A nice write but a little cliche just my opinion however 4/5 |
Very good... loved that while I was reading it i really didnt get caught up in the rhyme. It was so smooth... in other words great flow. Job Well done... 5/5 |
by Melpomene
This poem was quite sweet I enjoyed reading it not only onces but twice. I didn't find this piece to be cliche because I could feel the emotions straight from the heart and they were not just your basic emotions of love. Shape poetry oh so hard but you did pull it off so I give you credit for that. Well done on creating a lovely piece. Keep up the good work. ~Mel |
Good poem. I've done shape poetry before. This poem was wonderfully written as well. Unfortunatly I didn't figure what the shape is but I'm sure it looked nice. All you had to do was use dashes(hyphens) to space out the lines to create the shape on here. |
by Crystal Gaze
Fsams, that was very beautiful. |
by Vanessa
The word choice was simple but effective, the flow was great, and the emotion and message both clear and strong. I must say that you are clever, I have seen all kinds of things you have came up with, and I admire that. Keep up the good work, and please keep us on our toes. 5/5 |
by janiL
Aww..T_T *tear* |
Wow this is my first experience of a properly done shape poem. it was beautiful. such serene words of love. i think you've inspired me to attempt a shape poem myself. nice read, well done |
Soo sweet........nice pick of topic......5/5 ^_^ |
by Boy
Awe so swet. very romantic. its hard to dins sometimes these type of poetry realy lovely poem. |
by Sherry Lynn
This is very sweet and tender. I know that I have also craved to hold the one that I love, especially lately. |