I have never seen this type of poem before but i think it was exellent. I love also how you could use language to work with you on this poem nice job xxx alex xxx

Oh this is a lovely write. Beautifully penned, with true emotion. I saw the shape also, that must have been a bit difficult to do, but you did it justice. A very heartfelt poem I enjoyed reading. :]

5/5
Tammie

This is so beautiful. I love the shape too. I love the flow of this pieces, it suits so well.
Well Done
DnB

It makes an angle
right?
any way good poem
love the vidual words
great description
keep up the good work

I really loved this poem. It showed a lot of emotion. I really loved it. 5/5

This is a good poem a bit more mushy then I would deal with but none the less a good write good job Plot121

Amazing..! I can't imagine how u made that poem,, it has perfect shapes in every detail,,,
And the words,, it didn't look that u forced them to be that shape.. next time, would you teach me..?? ^^
the best poem i've ever read..
6/5 ^^

This is a great write and the shape made it even better. What i think is that you should space the poem here so readers will see the shape already without copy/paste. Still, overall a wonderful job. 5/5

Beautiful piece filled with wonderful emotion. It all flowed just flawlessly and overall it was a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

Wow.. awesome, I put it in Word, it's an angel! ..(unnecessary thing to say, you know it yourself, but I was really surprised)
That's beautiful done, very unique, never saw that before.
Sweet words,
End was great
Loved reading it
Take care

Awee....very cute, very nice idea adding the shap into it and it was wonderful to read---much luck---tara

Really nice. It was simple and straight to the point. I like the structure of your poem (and I checked out the shape as well.. =) clever). I liked how it got shorter as the poem approached the end. It's as if it was fading to an end. Just one thing though, I don't think you needed to make it rhyme. I think it would've been even stronger without some of the rhymes. Nice work.