Falling in love

by the come back   Sep 4, 2007


What is this feeling that I feel
About the girl thats so unreal
I think its love, oh my dear
But this love I couldn't reveal

Is this love?
Thats so untrue
Is this love?
Thats makes me so blue

I didn't know you yet,
But still you get
My heart to forgets
All the pain and the regret

I love you so true,
Even you can't do
I'm thinking of you,
But I didn't know if you also do

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  • 16 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Wow...dami na palang nag co2mment sa mga poems mo ah..keep up da good work,,.! nice poem ha..^o^ 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Some rhyming was forced, however the beauty of love and emotions of yours came through this poem. Great job, 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa Marzano

    Great job!
    i like it alot.

    Marissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    "My heart to forgets" << My heart too forgets.

    " love you so true,
    Even you can't do
    I'm thinking of you,
    But I didn't know if you also do "
    ^^ Flow isn't good, at all.

    The first two stanzas were great, I loved them, honest to god. But, .. The ending I didn't like as well. The flow was off, and it didn't make much sense to me.

    I did get the idea and meaning, along with the emotion, and I'm pretty sure those were decent.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Very beautiful! This is much better than anything I could come up with! 5/5

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