Tears are falling

by jeffery sechrest   Sep 4, 2007


Watching her wipe her tears away
she won't let anyone see her cry.
trying hard not to be the only one she will never need
trying to break this habit.
so that i can be by her side
but my presence is too painful
torn between what i feel.
wondering if i should go away/

Popping the pills that once fueled her anger,
I wonder if she will ever be mine again.
Her old habit reinstated with a single word.
She will never know the pain I go through just to be hers.

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  • 17 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Umm well...
    for a non rhyming poem...it has a good flow...
    but there are a fw things u should work on..
    like this for example
    "trying hard not to be the only one she will never need."
    doesnt make sense..
    and this "but my presence is t painful."
    u should fix it.."but my presence is too painful."
    and dont put dots at the end of every sentence...stephen (the club owner) wrote a huge article abt things like that...
    well...it makes the reader stop, and thats not wat u want in EVERY line...u know
    and btw...it kinda seems unfinished...like u had more to say...but for some reasons...just didnt..
    ill refrain from voting, just fix a couple of things and im sure ull get loads of good comments and votes..
    (sorry if any of this seemed a bit too offensive...i wasnt trying to be...)

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