Take me by the hand

You have a very intersting perspective on things. I find it quite unique and interesting.. SO GOOD JOB

Another well written peice of poetry, good job.

In this line, "Tomorrow we're all be dead" The word "we're" should be "we'll"

Peace, Joe

InterestinG tO reaD, excitinG tO seE thE sounD oF youR truE knowledgE, alL iN alL, you'rE a lovelY poeT..... keeP uP youR writinG anD brinG morE excitinG poeM iN futurE... 5/5

Once again this is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done! ;)