Once again this is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done! ;)

InterestinG tO reaD, excitinG tO seE thE sounD oF youR truE knowledgE, alL iN alL, you'rE a lovelY poeT..... keeP uP youR writinG anD brinG morE excitinG poeM iN futurE... 5/5

Another well written peice of poetry, good job.

In this line, "Tomorrow we're all be dead" The word "we're" should be "we'll"

Peace, Joe

You have a very intersting perspective on things. I find it quite unique and interesting.. SO GOOD JOB