This is an ahmazing poem.. i really really like your style. like seriously i start to read and it just draws me in.. that make sence.. lol

"Visions of negligence and misunderstanding
Aren't visions at all
But are my past
Present
And future"

^^My favourite part, that really stood out to me.

This felt more like a story than a poem in some places.
I noticed you used a lot of fillers (I, and, you) etc. Try eliminating some of themto help smooth the flow out.

"And no one can set me free
NO ONE!
EVER!"

^^I think the use of caps takes away power of the piece...
Maybe try something like:

"Now no one can set me free,
Not now,
Not ever."