Dad

by Valiantpenguin   Sep 5, 2007


If your reading this dad,
Then tell me one thing
Have you really read the other?
Or are you still faking?

That's all I know you as
Is a faker and a liar
Making promises to me
Only to break them later

You wonder why I don't like you
Why I dislike being at your house
Could it be because your wife?
Or did I see a mouse?

Well when you don't pay attention
To what I say or do
When you sit on your ass all day
Need I remind you?

All the promises you made
Never really we're fulfilled
And you ask me to give up the one who was there
When you never were?

Not going to happen
And you say you see yourself
In a lot of my poems
Are you that blind, or that stupid?

If you want to be my dad
Pay attention, stop being an ass

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  • 16 years ago

    by Strange and Beautiful

    This is a great poem. It's written really good. I see many people can relate to it. I loved it!
    5/5
    :)
    Wonderful job!

    Sorry the comment isn't that great, I have writers block.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    I can relate,my dads a jerk
    iusedto loo kupto him somuch,but thingschange
    keep it up love and take care
    -LIsa

  • 17 years ago

    by claerwen

    Yeah I agree with gone and lost.. though every situation is different my father makes promise but never for fills.

    I just had to be strong I guess..we all do

    I like your poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Good Enough

    I can relate.

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