by lostwithin Sep 5, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You plus me equals two hearts as one |
by *Charisma*
Very sweet piece indeed....good opening lines. You lost your rhyme in the 2nd to last two verses, and at times your flow was changed, but overall, the piece was good...just needs a little refining (as do a few of mine lol) |