What a wonderful piece. The imagery is great.

When the candle flame begins to quiver

When the breeze of desperation begins to below

When streets suddenly become deserted and lone

When the heart is left with no consolation.

When shoulders can no more bear

The burden of grief

Love, lends its comforting hand

Like a passionate friend

These lines really moved me.
Take Care Cindy

Wow. This was beautiful. The imagery in this was just stunning, the flow was good, and the descriptions amazing. I really liked this and alhtough it had a few grammer mistakes it was still wonderful. Lovely job. 5/5

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