What My Heart Wants To Say (Triple Triolet)

by Jenni Marie   Sep 5, 2007


So sorry for everything that went on
Mostly sorry I'll never say it to your face
Bitterly disappointed all the love has gone
So sorry for everything that went on
Recalling when I once thought you were the one
Regretting that our love turned out to be a waste
So sorry for everything that went on
Mostly sorry I'll never say it to your face

Constantly wishing to go back to the past
Instead of wishing that each other would fail
Reminiscing when we used to have such a blast
Constantly wishing to go back to the past
To when we thought happy memories would last
Now all that's left is anger and betrayal
Constantly wishing to go back to the past
Instead of wishing that each other would fail

So many things that have been left unsaid
There's so much that my heart wants to say
So many thoughts rolling around inside my head
So many things that have been left unsaid
Every cruel thing you said made me wish I was dead
Still I continue loving you day after day
So many things that have been left unsaid
There's so much that my heart wants to say

Triolet-Consists of 8lines.
The 1st, 4th and 7th repeat.
The 2nd and 8th repeat as well.
Rhyme scheme is abaaabab

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  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    A good poem, A bit of it is a little choppy in rhythm and rhyme, but I don't have any specific lines to point out. The ending could be stronger.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    You showed a lot of hurt in this poem and it screams out in each word but the highest point was that even as I read it there was a tone of solace in it that just drove the poem into ones heart great work. Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Another great Triolet, you have actually inspired me to write my own now :D I think you have a talent which is fantastic and your poems really reflect you character giving a bold image really well written. xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    My favorite was the first and last stanza's

    the poem as a whole was just great.. it was something that i only wish i Could do.

    You have a great talent, in every poem i've read of yours you've managed to get someone to relate to you, or to have someone understand whats been happening, and i think that takes real talent, talent that you definitely have.

    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem is beautiful.. when I read it it reminds me of my ex-boyfriend, Ray. We just broke up yesterday but I still feel every single emotion in this poem. It is truly flawless and the title alone grabbed my attention. I can't say I have a favorite line or section, I just love the entire thing! You kept it neat and organized too =) Great job!! This is definitely going on my favorites list! Please keep up the awesome work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Rikku~ aka ~Kayla~

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