This poem is beautiful.. when I read it it reminds me of my ex-boyfriend, Ray. We just broke up yesterday but I still feel every single emotion in this poem. It is truly flawless and the title alone grabbed my attention. I can't say I have a favorite line or section, I just love the entire thing! You kept it neat and organized too =) Great job!! This is definitely going on my favorites list! Please keep up the awesome work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~ aka ~Kayla~

My favorite was the first and last stanza's

the poem as a whole was just great.. it was something that i only wish i Could do.

You have a great talent, in every poem i've read of yours you've managed to get someone to relate to you, or to have someone understand whats been happening, and i think that takes real talent, talent that you definitely have.

xoxo
--Chelsey

Another great Triolet, you have actually inspired me to write my own now :D I think you have a talent which is fantastic and your poems really reflect you character giving a bold image really well written. xxx alex xxx

You showed a lot of hurt in this poem and it screams out in each word but the highest point was that even as I read it there was a tone of solace in it that just drove the poem into ones heart great work. Plot121

A good poem, A bit of it is a little choppy in rhythm and rhyme, but I don't have any specific lines to point out. The ending could be stronger.