Amazing poem is this, excellent expressions are given, I am really proud to serve you with my comments so as to ascend this poem with more reputations.... Keep up your pretty good writing and looking forward more like this...

Its we,

Luz and Naz
(the two dimensions)

'He knows too well,
What lies ahead,
but ignorance consumes his head,'
Accidental rhyme...thats the only thing that annoyed me. Upset the flow a bit.
Otherwise its like woah. Good vocab, and topic, hmmm, a mary-sue close to home perhaps? ;)

Great poem. Love the first stanza.

Again another amazing poem, your really able to write everything so well, nothing seems forced or over done. well done! loved reading it!