Tol ang lalim...hehehehehehe peo im agree with you...5/5 ^_^ great writer.....pinoy rocks...

Again nice write, a few grammar changes and it would be perfect. Great topic, nice job.

This was very good and you did it on such a intreasting topic...Good job...5/5

What an interesting topic to write about. You speak so much truth and the reader can only agree with you.

Making has become full of greed and through all of our enhancements, or advancements.. we are slowly killing off mother nature and everything that she has provided for us.

--Sher

I think that your poems are definitly out of my league because im not getting them at all, you are a fantastic writer and i am jealous that i dont understand it great job