Good poem. Great meaning behind it. It was wonderfully written. I loved the fourth stanza the most. The poem's flow was flawless and the rhyming was great too. 5/5

-Shannon <3

I think it's beautiful... 5/5! Please rate/comment me back :)

TRUE SO DARN TRUE!!

"Cherish every second
Do good at every turn"

that ive learned from you now!! do good at every turn
So when you close your eyes in death
You're people soar, not burn .

strong words.

i love it =)

5/5

You do have a vast ideas..well that me is a real talent..uhm keep it up..i hope for more..
5/5 for it!!

My take on this poem was that of life's worth; and, it made me think of how I can do the best in my life, so that it matters when I'm gone. I enjoyed this poem very much; it rhymed on key words which emphasized their meaning and also made the poem that much more enjoyable. A poem with a classic theme such as this one, is tougher to create, originally, but I think you did pretty well in making this piece your own. When you're gone a poem like this shows you were a person of thought and wisedom. I shall remember you for this poem and I am glad to have read it.

You have shown your talent quite effectively, to me. Farewell fellow poet.

~Richie

I love how you end a lot of your poems. I like when poems keep me thinking after I've read them, which yours do. It was a positive poem, definitely inspirational.

Well done.