Wow, Gr8 poem!!!
Keep it up!!
=)

A very good poem. I love the rhyming in this one. I woudln't change it at all. I can tell that it came from the heart. Good job!
5.5
Ciao~

This really started out touching and sweet, and then there was this unexpected twist:D.. I thought it was really creative. ANd I love the concept.
This poem is probably my favourite so far.
Keep it up,
Elaine.

Ahhh.
this is sweet

It's very good and touching...keep up ;) 5/5