I hate

by MARI   Sep 5, 2007


I hate having to be alone
i hate having to hate myself because of the way u make me feel.
i hate how u act so nice to others and when it comes to me u are mean
I'm tired of begging you and u don't care
you love seeing me hurt
i ask myself why do i think sooo much about u its a waste of time
i wish i could hate u but i cant
i hate not hating u but..
i mostly hate how i feel
myself to sleep and I'm scared one day i will drown myself in my own tears!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    This is very passionate and deep. sounds alot like 10 things i hate about you. vry good!!!

    Just a question-in the last line is it supposed to be "I cry myself to sleep....." you just have "myself to sleep..." might want to check that out.

    But besides that-great work.

    Aish
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    That's nice !

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Lovelyy. life's never going to be easy, i love how u expressed yerself. wonderful workk. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    This was really good,the way you are feeling is expressed very well. Check your last line,did you mean to say "I cry myself to sleep" check it I think you just omitted the start of the line.....Excellent write!

  • 16 years ago

    by jauri

    I can relate to that
    recently too...

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