I loved this poem.And thanks for the comments I love them.and i love to give them. I love this poem so much cause I felt a connection with it.I was head over heals for this guy,and he was fo me. Then one day it changed,and he was an ass everyday on. I wanted him to love meat first.Then I wanted him to feel my pain. and I remember crying as well.5/5

Wow. this was way good. i have felt the exact same way. it takes time to get over them.. but it happens eventually... just keep goin strong. great poem. 5/5
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I can relate to that
recently too...

This was really good,the way you are feeling is expressed very well. Check your last line,did you mean to say "I cry myself to sleep" check it I think you just omitted the start of the line.....Excellent write!

Lovelyy. life's never going to be easy, i love how u expressed yerself. wonderful workk. keep it up.

That's nice !

This is very passionate and deep. sounds alot like 10 things i hate about you. vry good!!!

Just a question-in the last line is it supposed to be "I cry myself to sleep....." you just have "myself to sleep..." might want to check that out.

But besides that-great work.

Aish
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