by BreakMyWingsAndRun Sep 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I wish someone would've told me, |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
For one,I think it would be better if you broke it into stanzas of four lines instead of two.But all in all it was very well written && the emotion was great.It flowed smoothly && your word choice was excellent.5/5 |
So good... So sad... So much emotion.... Argh please tell me this didn't really happen?? Awwww lvoe is the most painful, most wonderful thing EVER. |
Sad, I like it very much. Had a nice flow to it, very well done.5/5 |
by bluefate
So good... too sad though |