Somebody Tell Me

by BreakMyWingsAndRun   Sep 6, 2007


I wish someone would've told me,
You would be out of my life so soon.

It's like I can barley remember,
How my heart got such a deep wound.

And then for a second,
I think of that night.

My future was tore in two,
In my mind is a horrible sight.

The sound of sirens,
your body covered in red.

Seeing both the cars,
Trying not to think you're dead.

We've not known each other for long,
The second i knew i loved you.

You were gone.
All the words that were left unspoken,

I can't stand it anymore,
You've got to know i love you.

And you're the only one i adore.
I see your picture on TV,

Trying to think of the bad,
But my mind just can't do it.

I have to remember all of the good times we had,
But it makes me miss you even more.

The pain is too much,
I can't take it.

I never knew how much i would miss your touch,
But now You're gone and i am here.

I guess I'll just live my life,
As if you were near.

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  • For one,I think it would be better if you broke it into stanzas of four lines instead of two.But all in all it was very well written && the emotion was great.It flowed smoothly && your word choice was excellent.5/5

    -Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    So good... So sad... So much emotion.... Argh please tell me this didn't really happen?? Awwww lvoe is the most painful, most wonderful thing EVER.

  • 17 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Sad, I like it very much. Had a nice flow to it, very well done.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by bluefate

    So good... too sad though