Comments : Somebody Tell Me

  • 17 years ago

    by bluefate

    So good... too sad though

  • 17 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Sad, I like it very much. Had a nice flow to it, very well done.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    So good... So sad... So much emotion.... Argh please tell me this didn't really happen?? Awwww lvoe is the most painful, most wonderful thing EVER.

  • 16 years ago

    by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx

    For one,I think it would be better if you broke it into stanzas of four lines instead of two.But all in all it was very well written && the emotion was great.It flowed smoothly && your word choice was excellent.5/5

    -Amber