Days Go By

by Beautiful Chaos   Sep 6, 2007


As the sun melts into heaven
The sky's a rosy haze
Your eyes fade back into the past
Your soul is set ablaze

The times you laughed until you cried
Or cried until you bled
Locked away inside your mind
Trapped inside your head

Time could always heal your wounds
But where has it all gone
Your youth is far behind you now
The sands of time withdrawn

Forever seemed so far away
But now it feels so near
You never thought you'd be afraid
Taste that bitter fear

Dyings not what scares you most
It's what you leave unsaid
The way you've made your loved ones feel
The ripples you did spread

Was your time and were your actions
Reason to believe
That life is worth the smiles and pain
That feeling comes to weave

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  • 17 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    This is a very beautiful poem you have here. The details in the first stanza struck me really hard. And, the ending caped it off as well as you posibly could. I liked reading this quite a bit. Don't quit, you write really well.

    I am really tired so I shall do your other one's tommorow. Thanks for your feedback.

    Take care.

    ~Richie...

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well written, perfect flow, amazing word choce brillant vocab, the emtions were clear and strong, and so was the message. excellently done, no room for improvement 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    It reminds me of my grandma..died few years ago..i cried so much becoz i do care a lot for her..
    by the way this one is awesome..you describe it well..the emotions and flowed suits out right..

    for whom do you dedicated it to?
    5/5 for it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by shadowcat

    Beautiful flow.
    i loved it, 5/5

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