by shadowcat
Beautiful flow. |
by Veamm
It reminds me of my grandma..died few years ago..i cried so much becoz i do care a lot for her.. |
by Vanessa
Well written, perfect flow, amazing word choce brillant vocab, the emtions were clear and strong, and so was the message. excellently done, no room for improvement 5/5 |
This is a very beautiful poem you have here. The details in the first stanza struck me really hard. And, the ending caped it off as well as you posibly could. I liked reading this quite a bit. Don't quit, you write really well. |