Comments : Days Go By

  • 17 years ago

    by shadowcat

    Beautiful flow.
    i loved it, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    It reminds me of my grandma..died few years ago..i cried so much becoz i do care a lot for her..
    by the way this one is awesome..you describe it well..the emotions and flowed suits out right..

    for whom do you dedicated it to?
    5/5 for it!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Well written, perfect flow, amazing word choce brillant vocab, the emtions were clear and strong, and so was the message. excellently done, no room for improvement 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    This is a very beautiful poem you have here. The details in the first stanza struck me really hard. And, the ending caped it off as well as you posibly could. I liked reading this quite a bit. Don't quit, you write really well.

    I am really tired so I shall do your other one's tommorow. Thanks for your feedback.

    Take care.

    ~Richie...