It was different, Never really read a poem about this kind of message, but the flow was really good and you did a great job on this piece. To me it was really unique...Goood JOb

5/5

I had to read this poem a few times, but that is what I like. The fact that I can sit here a read something over and over again to get a new thought... perceptive.. it is just great.

This is one of those that no matter who it is or how many times it is read there will always be something different to take from it.

--Sher

This one is good. Just correct 'papers were'. Its very poetic n well written. KEEP IT UP

I was sort of confused about this poem, its a lot different than any ive read before and it was hard for me to understand exactly what was going on, im not saying it was a bad poem, maybe it was just a poem for a more sophisticated mind

Wow well done
i love it
xx

It was awesome. i loved it, nice work 5/5