Girl, This is so sweet.Damn, I love this poem!Each stanza was very well done!!Keep it up! |
by Melinda
WOW! THIS IS REALLY GOOD. 5/5 |
by Faithless
Wow this is a very sweet poem I like how you penned it down. Well i'm not too sure whether you wrote it from your perspective...cause the way i see it...you seem to put urself in a guy' shoes to pen this down. I think the repetition of the 'promise me' kindda worked for me through out the stanza.It was really a delightful to read.Keep it up |