Wow!!Excellent job for this.The title itself caught me!!The rhyming was great.And I love the last stanza, Very strong!!Well done again.
Take care

"Outwards she appears happy, inside she's full of broken dreams
She doesn't know what to do, tears falling so salty and hot
She's just another broken heart, that the world forgot"

^That ending really made the whole poem beutiful to me. There's so many deep emotions flowing around in this poem and I could feel them while reading on. A breath taking piece.
Jennie, you have some talent girl. =] keep up the great work!
--Viola

That was ahmazing
your such a great writer!