A powerful and inspiring message written within your words.... a heartfelt write.

I really like this because it shows a determination and strong will. We're all broken apart at some points in life but rising above it is what matters. You've showed that in this poem.
Powerful and heartfelt. An amazing piece! keep it up. =]
--Viola

A really heartfelt story again lol. I thought the punctuation in this on really was exellent and helped the stanzas flow proerly and effectively. fantastic write xxx alex xxx