Love it!

Oh wow, that was great. I loved the last two lines. I have no critiques 5/5

AMAZING! Definitely been here. Though my poetic style would never have allowed me to write such a brilliant piece, it is definitely something I've experienced, and could see myself saying. It's a new favorite of mine, and will be added to my list of fav poems!
Charisma*

Ok definately a 5! I like the fact that you finally came to terms with not being wanted back..It's tough.

They see you brushing me off,
Like dust on your pants that you want to get rid of.

Right there is one of the best analogies (spelling?) i've heard in a long time!