The Lost One.

by Solus   Sep 6, 2007


See these mounds of black dust, each one is a broken dream. Every breath now choked by their dark reminders.

Hear the whispers of discontent, all are the lies I was told in life. Evil echoes when I try to listen.

Feel the chilling shadows, these are the tears I've shed in vain. Freezing my soul when I try to sleep.

Look upon the shattered glass, these were people I gave my heart to. Each step cuts deeper the wounds by their betrayal.

Touch the scars upon my skin, every one a lesson given by his hand. Bursting anew every night.

Notice that sad little husk, that's me. Losing each time I try to fight.

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  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Wow...so powerful and just beautiful writing

    so sad but so amazing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, very deep and powerful. I like the choice of words and the atmosphere that you created.
    Well done, keep up, 5/5 from me.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Hear the whispers of discontent, all are the lies I was told in life. Evil echoes when I try to listen.-

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