Comments : Because of You

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Wow, well penned Angie dear, though shortly, but well expressed emotions, oh so heartfelt penned, well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by ChaosKiller69

    This is a really nice poem. I like it.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Great poem. I love to read your love poems, there are always so unique and somehow special and so magical. You portrayed the emotions in this piece excellently, and the whole poem is very touching, it made me smile... It's really good to love someone so much, I'm happy for you.
    Keep writing, 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Simply beautiful... Wording is great and emotions are expressed incredible. I enjoyed reading it, I like every line of it. You should be proud on this piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    The ultimate true love no doubt.
    I like how you reversed the first
    two lines as the last two lines,
    an excellent read Willow,
    Bogie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awww i really liked how this was exspressed. You did a great job writing this i especially liked this part
    "trusting comes easier
    than it did before
    opening my heart, soul
    to love freely again
    I'm not afraid
    because of you"
    Overall it was a beautiful poem from begginning to end 5/5:)

  • 17 years ago

    by abby

    That was a really pretty poem...i like it alot!

    5/5 i think.

    -abby

  • 17 years ago

    by Wendy1

    You've had many visits on this poem...i also thought it was a really nice one.

  • 17 years ago

    by sf49

    Nice but 'be yourself' with every1 ...

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Wonderful piece, and a great way to express how one person can make so much difference, well done xox lithium

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    What a beautifully simple way to express your trust and faith in another human being. It is a wonderful feeling knowing that there is someone whom you can be yourself with without any pressure.
    A lovely write
    K xx

  • 17 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    That was truly sweet!!
    ^^!! I love knowing that you can be yourself in front of someone, you don't have to hide...
    I wish I could do that sadly...
    Great poem.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Great work

    "let my true smile shine"

    love that line because a smile can be something your self conscious about... when you smile for a camera it has to be perfect, but shen you're with that special someone, it doesn't matter...
    love it
    keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    The flow of ur emotion is really unique

  • 17 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Really nice and beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by ihrtschlepper

    I love it, i totally understand!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    I really loved this poem.
    i'm going to put it on my favs. :)
    5/5 of course.
    plz return the favor

  • 16 years ago

    by JaM

    Aww, this is such a sweet poem. Great work Willow.