Good poem!!! I liked it alot!!
Well written!!!
5/5
=]

I liked this poem, probably my favorite out of yours. I only have the love one left to read. I like the rhyming, I like the idea, I like the ending. I loved the whole poem.
5.5 easy... :]
Ciao~

This was well written.
The wording you used was awesome, and I really thought your rymthing worked:)
This peice was very inspiring.

Well done,
Elaine.

Good poem in overall. The flow is good but the word choice needs to be improved. I know you have the potential and you can make it flawless

tc
Fsams