by Wallace Sep 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Falsified emotions rest dormant tonight |
Its great when two people come together to create somthing like this. It was a really well written job xxx alex xxx |
I thought this poem was absolutely outstanding and once again your flow and word choice was perfect. The detail in everyline is matched in so few poems - excellent write as always 5/5 GG23 |
by Angie
Damn.... you both have left me speechless. You write very well together. |
Amazing poem! the wording is amazing. you can really tell you must have spent ages on it! loved the line "Crestfallen stars explode in heartbreak" great work. |
by Veamm
It was awesome..the words are too deep..haha!! |