OMG i just love it, its an amazing piece. 2 great writers combined is always good. 5/5

I love reading collab poems it makes them so much more interesting with 2 peoples minds put together this was a fantastic poem keep it up

It was awesome..the words are too deep..haha!!
and well in fact i don't really understand it..lol..
keep it up!!

Amazing poem! the wording is amazing. you can really tell you must have spent ages on it! loved the line "Crestfallen stars explode in heartbreak" great work.

Damn.... you both have left me speechless. You write very well together.

I thought this poem was absolutely outstanding and once again your flow and word choice was perfect. The detail in everyline is matched in so few poems - excellent write as always 5/5 GG23

Its great when two people come together to create somthing like this. It was a really well written job xxx alex xxx