The longing is something I can't understand, for which I'm sorry.. however.. when the time is right, it will happen.. Well written poem. I found the use of unfilled, and filled in the immediate stanzas almost as if the 'filled' is repetitive, but then, I'm not the one to talk, as when you're in the mood to write, you simply have to write, regardless of the 'deemed to be correct word', as long as they're the words you're feeling. Very well done. xx