Cheer up

by Veamm   Sep 7, 2007


Cheer up

Pointing hungry eyes
aiming to your heart
Wondering continuously
to know your part

Dim lights beckoned
to alert your spirit
and to see the truth
that you're born for it

Lime stones stand
carried by waves
to show confusion
of things we hate

having a self doubt
and to be petrified
to have will and skills
to learn how to fight

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  • 17 years ago

    by Eagleman

    Go go go go go

  • 17 years ago

    by Leah20

    I liked the first three stanzas, but not the fourth. I thought that the sedond stanza was the best of the poem. The fourth stanza really didn't seem to fit to me, it felt too forced.

  • 17 years ago

    by lish

    Very well written, i like the emotion and feeling in this poem
    xx

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