It was well penned. the emotions and rhyming i good!!

keep it up!!

Beautiful sad, Beautiful expressed emotions written....

No faith in things you cannot find
No hope to hold it's left behind
Within the heart that strings along
Without laughter without song.

I hope thing doing well with you Jeannie dear, take care. Bert.

Dark nights find your heart in tears
Stars wrestle with the break of fear
Against the eyes that show the soul
Among the thoughts the mind has stole.
^^^
You've summed up my life in this stanza Jeannie.
Another heart wrenching read Auntie!

Penned with excellence!