I liked the references to the seasons in this - the spring with talk of "buds" and "babes growing ever" with the visual of pastel colours. Summer and its water deprivation and the fall stealing its light from a deserting sun. Winter with its "chilled perception" and mention of hibernating bares (bears).

Especially liked the ending where you talk about the complete cycle (death and rebirth of not only the flowers/animals etc but also of the sun's "light and dark" and the characteristics of each "shifting" season.

Good write - nice nature poem where you still have to think about what you're reading.

And dont tell me I got it wrong... again... please!! :) haha.

This reminds me of some of the best of what I remember of a friend of mine's journal entries -- he was a pretty eccentric guy though, most of his journal was esoteric to the core.

Hey, great imagery in this piece Jane. I really liked the description of the sun. Well done. Greta xo

That was great.
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Not only is this extraordinary, but there are no typos or misspellings buried in this ingeniously graphic imagery....Impressive all around and Bravo!

This has an amazing Floydian feel to it. I loved it. Hope you've been well.
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Beautiful imagery. Why would you not want people to find this again?
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