Comments : Crushed

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like it a lot, greatly written piece with a lot of emotions. Whole poem is very good, from the beginning to the end, and it's very unique.
    My favorite stanzas are:

    -I'm not in love,
    Only of a lost soul,
    Dear was your mind,
    Now anger has stole,

    Take my words now,
    Rip them, pull them down,
    Please know I'm here,
    And I won't let you drown,-

    I like the wording in this poem, and the flow is also great.
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Grotesque Angel

    Hmm, i dont know if this is good or bad.
    the poem itself was really well written.
    The only prblem i have with you atm is that you keep putting words into my mouth and usually i dont mean anything you say. so if you can find it in yourself to only take in what ive said not what you assume. please.

  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Lovely! A good personal piece oozing emotion. Again, a unique viewpoint - I'm impressed by your way of thinking. The word usage in this poem is ace. Nicely written, sincere, and touching.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N