Little Birdy, love the title. I like this one a lot, very true in ways.

I loved it, it sounded so cute while i was reading it and than you said you hated the birdie, nice work 5/5

Hmm, a little birdie, I love the metaphor, and the mystery of who or what the birdie is, really. This poem is very intruiging, and it has a personal meaning for me which enhances the mood I get from the poem even more. I also enjoyed the end of the first stanza, the darkness, to a fun-feeling I received from the first lines. If anything this poem is inspirational. This is one great write, and read.

Farewell, Sydney!

~Richhiee

Hi sam,

thanks again for your comments and valuable votes. i don't mind u correcting me. i know i have a problem wih punctuations but maybe i should learn it soon.... thanks again for your suggestions. keep readin my poems n keep writing your blockbusters... take care... njoi...

I don't quite think this fits in the humor section, but it was well written. A unique approach on deceit; a very clever idea. I like the fact that this piece can be made personal to anyone who reads it, as the bird metaphor can be uniquely pinned to whatever each person relates it to. A pleasure to read.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Cool poem with a great hilarity. Love the way words are strung each other. Your poem is very creative :)5/5 all the way

tc
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Haha that was good.

I thought it was gonna be a nice little innocent poem and then i read "Little birdie, you'll go to hell" and i was like :o =D

5/5

Aww this poem is really cute! I really like this a lot! I wish i could write a poem like this one, your very talented! I'll be waiting for your newest stuff! Thanks for commenting mine.

Wow, that was so unique. I loved the message and the emotion. They were both so clear! It flowed so well! That was amazing, so powerful. And again so unique!

Really cute piece, i'll say. The title was unique, which is why i clicked on it. And then i'm reading, and see the line about going to hell and i'm like, where that come from? lol
Okay, seriously. I love how relatable it is and the message it sends to its readers. Good job.

Wow... amazing... absolutely... wow. and sadly ironic, because i had two best friends by the nicknames of raven, and they both did as this poem says. beautiful. 5

Cute poem, in a twisted kinda way...lol.

loved it 5/5