His Inbetween

by lish   Sep 7, 2007


Is your love for me true?
or am I your in between
Will we ever be together
as your love remains unseen

We link fingers in class
And you love to hold my hand
All i want is your love
Please baby, just understand

As soon as we're around his friends
He pretends he doesn't care
I know he really misses me
But his actions, I cannot bare

Once he finds someone new
He throws me out the door
My heart left torn apart
As i sit crying on the floor

But then they break up
And he comes running back to me
I know the right thing to do
Is to run away or flee

My heart is torn apart
As once again he leaves
I cant stand this anymore
So i roll up my sleeves

As i slice the knife across
The adrenalin is great
This funny feeling has taken away
All my feelings of anger and hate

I Suddenly hit a vein
And the blood begins to run
I sit here in my room
Wondering what Ive done

I'm feeling really faint
All dizzy in the head
And all of a sudden
I drop to the floor, dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I didn't like the ending. For me I thought you could have done a lot more with the end of that poem. I thought it was good and yearning and then I feel like you gave up. Which makes me sad. The poem was really good though and easy to relate to. Flow was good. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is beautiful yet tragic

    It reflects the creul nature sometimes desplayed by Cupid

    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Ouch the ending was so unexpected and I am still in shock. I truly thought this would have a happy ending but BAM you hit me with a shocker. I loved the beginning more then the end only because it help more emotion and the imagery was flawless. Overall, well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Wow... that was so powerful. It was well written and it flowed to well. The ending was so scary. But your meaning is conveyed so well. You have a lot of talent, and it was still a beautiful write!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Always and Never

    This was really touching. I couldn't stop reading it. It's sad that people really do that over a guy. That was a beautiful poem.

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