Well done Melissa. I thought the last verse was especially lucid.

Wow....so beautiful...one suggestion though...I think it should be "its" in the title, without the apostrophe....I think an apostrophe is usually used to denote a missing letter, or as a possessive word...

Oh actually I really am unsure about what I told you...Lol...sorry..

Excellent piece with great metaphors and descriptions within. Very unique, too. I can relate to some parts of the poem. I really like the way you write, you have great and unique style.
This poem has good rhythm and flow.
5/5 from me