by MakeBelieveLove Sep 7, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
She couldn't say, |
by Miu
A great poem, more story like but still very emotional and very sad. Flowed great so it was really good to read it. Also, got pictures in my head. Beautiful. I hope that didn't happen to you. |
Good poem. Way better than the other one I read. This was wonderfully written and I liked the structure. This poem was very unique and flowed very well. You expressed your emotions wonderfully as well. |
by Fsams
Lovely poem and flowing good. Its unique in tems o fthe wordings and the flow 5/5 |
by GoodMEMORIES
Really well written.. i really liked it.. |
Very well written poem, but so sad.. the emotions in it really stood out the way you wrote it.. and it was so descriptive, its like being there.. very good poem. |