Still Free

by MakeBelieveLove   Sep 7, 2007


She couldn't say,
What needed to be said...
It was embarrassing,
All the people
Looking at her.
Tears filled her eyes
When she got off the stand
He looked at her,
The same look.
he gave her that night...
That night was the reason
They were there,
The reason she couldn't
Speak, or believe.
She wished she could
Go numb,
and forget everything...
That night he took everything,
Her dreams. faith to love,
and her innocents,
He gets on the stand
and begins to lie,
He might as well
Just called her a w h o r e...
That is what he
Is making her out to be...
She begins to cry
She knows he is lying...
There is nothing that
She can do..
But sit there,
And day dream,
about that night...
She is woken by
The sound of the judge...
Proved Innocence
And all she can do
Is sit there
Knowing he took everything
and He is still Free....

~~~Its something that is emotional to write, but Please comment...
<3
MakeBelieveLove

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  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    A great poem, more story like but still very emotional and very sad. Flowed great so it was really good to read it. Also, got pictures in my head. Beautiful. I hope that didn't happen to you.
    Keep it up. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Way better than the other one I read. This was wonderfully written and I liked the structure. This poem was very unique and flowed very well. You expressed your emotions wonderfully as well.
    5/5

    -Shannon <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Lovely poem and flowing good. Its unique in tems o fthe wordings and the flow 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Really well written.. i really liked it..

    nothing bad i can say

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Very well written poem, but so sad.. the emotions in it really stood out the way you wrote it.. and it was so descriptive, its like being there.. very good poem.

    Good Job =]

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