Comments : I Only Wanted To Love You

  • 16 years ago

    by isabel

    It's a lovely poem... short, yet to the point...
    it flows very nicely as well...
    the rhyme scheme is okay until the last stanza...
    "memories" and "me" are a little bit forced rhyme...

    the poem itself is easy to relate...
    there's nothing as hopeless as a broken heart...
    and sometimes people just throw away what could have been without giving it a try, without giving it a thought...

    5/5

    *isabel*