In My Little Black Soul ...

by Lost and Alone   Sep 7, 2007


In my little black soul, there are little black words, all hidden in disguise
In my little black soul, there are bleeding eyes, waiting, just waiting, to cry
In my little black soul, there's a little black conscience, wanting to see the sky
In my little black soul, I have hidden this all behind a blanket of lies
In my little black soul, there is a small corner, devoted to loving and care
In my little black soul, in that small corner, I swear almost nothing is there
In my little black soul, filled to the brim, regrets and hatred galore
In my little black soul, what's begun from the start, is a little black hatred/love war
In my little black soul, in my little black heart, you can hear my screams and cries
In my little black soul, in my little black heart, I have hidden behind my disguise

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lost in Life

    Really good.... maybe try a different form and re arrange words and lines and I think it could be MUCH better but yes this is Really Good.4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    OMFG. I LOVED THIS FREAKIN POEM! =} Greeat Job! 5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • Keep up the A-M-A-Z-I-N-G work.
    -samantha renea

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    Wow great work!
    keep it up
    -Lisa

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