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by Taylor Sep 7, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / unexplained
Her heart is beating faster Then it usually will Can anyone save her? Love's out on the kill Call an ambulance! We need to save this girl She's putting her life on the line Because that boy is her world What's happening to her? Is she still breathing? Where is that boy? Is he leaving? The heart monitor is stopping This is an emergency! Someone get the docter! This seems so scary.. Oh she's blacking out She's taking short breaths She must know what's coming She's falling to her death Great, look whose coming. That boy who broke her heart Wait, what's he saying? He loved her from the start.
by bugsy88
Great rythm.
by Capri
I love your poem! definite 5/5 :D Keep it up