This is like the early works of Senses Fail. Raw, all-over-the-place emotion.

I like your wording. You are brilliant with just how you can say things. But I do have two suggestions for you. The first one is your flow. Some of your lines are extremely long, while it's following rhyming line is very short in comparison, so it jolts the reader around instead of making for a smooth ride. The only other thing I noticed in just this poem was this line

It's depressing that people actually FEAR the idiot called "jock."

I feel like it was a forced rhyme, and really didn't fit in with the message of your poem, or not enough to have it in here. But that's just an opinion. I only offer suggestions because I know that's how we grow as poets. And how can we know what others truly think of our work and how they respond to our words if they are too afraid to be honest with us?
I look forward to more of your work as I think you have an amazing talent, I just think, like my own work, it needs some touchups here and there. :)
Charisma*

Wow... I simply love this one... I can so deeply relate to your words. You put yourself in this piece which gave great results- this poem is amazingly written and filled with excellently expressed emotions. I like it from the beginning to the end, I can't chose the favorite part.
I like the rhymes in whole piece, too, they sound very original and add great flow to this piece.
Your words usage is excellent, too.
Keep writing!